For a marker rendering this looks pretty awesome. By the looks of this picture it looks like some one look up from the bottom floor of an apartment complex. I see nothing wrong with this picture you have done. I also like how there is a bridge or some thing connecting to two sides of the building. I am sorry it took me this long to submit a critique on this piece of art you have done. Keep up the awesome job that you do. I hope to see more great work from you and other great artist like you. I thank you for asking me to critique this picture.
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Thanks, i undestand your comments and how some parts of the drawing are not realistic. But as one knows somethings you have to use your artistic license to adjust things to make sure the piece is clear. If i made the building as light or dark as it would have been it would the image would have lost alot of detail and this was a class project meant to be worked out entirely in ink. There are different shades of gray but it my opinion it would become too cartoon like. Which is why I shaded some in the back and actually used graphite mixed with the ink to create the gradations of shades
It makes me a little dizzy when i look at it...
Sorry, to me it was an intersting perspective
this looks like something from aperture science from the portal series
That's what I was just about to say! When I saw it I immediately thought portal.
Thanks for enjoying!
I love how it makes the viewer feel off-balance, and gives a feeling of vertigo. That lends movement to what otherwise would be a very stationary piece. Great work!
Omg talk about perspective..lol wow this is very very amazing. I can never do perspective it too difficult for me. This a lot of detail and it looks awesome.
Why thank you, it did take a while but i am happy with how it came out
How long did it take u?
Hmm well it didn't take that long to actually to the drawing because i sketched it out at first a few times, but all the extra details and layers or marker to show the different shades of light and shadow took a while to try and get right
Oh,this is my favourite!
Very complex geometry, even head spun!
Peering down from the top of the building i can feel the fear of falling down im actually scared of heights and this representation of heights and depths is really effective to scare the hell out of megreat job.
This is awesome!
This is really cool. I can never make straight lines even with a ruler. XD
if you did this with pencil your really good nice job
Awesome, it looks great!!!
I love perspective studies like this. So well done. And I think this might be my second comment.
Perfect! (I couldn't draw something like this if my life depended on it! )
Aww well thanks, it took a while but it is far from perfect
It doesn't have to be "perfect", it's EGG-cellent! And it's at least a 3-against-one vote, sooooo ... !YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! EVERYBODY WINS!!! Kirk & Kiki