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Overcoming the chaotic uncertains in the world by MyHeadWonders Overcoming the chaotic uncertains in the world by MyHeadWonders
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"Overcoming the Chaotic uncertainties in the world" FIGHT CANCER WITH ART

Watercolor and Ink

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:iconlloanalas:
The strongest aspect of this piece is the technique. I can take a glimpse at the kind of emotions you had while painting this piece within the brush strokes.

Another strong point for this piece is how you found a balance with the colors. To the normal non-artist person it may not be much, but you had to think about what colors you could use without overpowering each other and at the same time, just how much black you could use without creating too much contrast which could overpower the upper half of the image. Both halves of the image are balanced.

One thing that could surely use improvement would be the art direction of the hands. Perhaps softening the outline of the hands and revisiting the way you stylize it. The right hand seems smooth and flowing, while the left hand is much rounder and more cartoon-like. It should be one or the other just to create a bit of uniformity.

Even though this composition works, it could use some improvement as well. The way the hands just cut off could bug some viewers. It works nonetheless, but it's just a thought. I also noticed that the left hand isn't completely outlined, so that could perhaps be revisited if not intentional. It's great how the hands use the upper half color brush strokes as a background. That could be interpreted as having a symbolic meaning, overcoming the chaotic uncertainties in the world and into happiness.

Watercolor pieces are great and you did a great job in controlling the media. Overall, it's a beautiful piece and it's well put. Just like everything else, everything can always use improvement. Good job!
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I like I how I see the two sides of chaos in the world in this picture. I also like how the hands are coming together to over power the chaos. I see how you used water colors and another style of art. The only problem I see with this picture is the fact of how the water color appear on the arms of the two hands. This issue is not your fault using water colors on this picture. It takes some real talent to master water color painting. I am sorry it took me some time to submit a critique to this picture. Keep up the awesome job you do with your art. I thank you for asking me to critique this picture you have done.
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Shadowmist14 Featured By Owner Edited Jul 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your work is great! My Mom is an artist and she says to try realistic and imprecations. We think it would be a good challenge for you.  Good luck friend!
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:iconmyheadwonders:
MyHeadWonders Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2015  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Well thank you, I used to be in architecture so I drew alot of realist stuff early on based on images or actual things I saw. I have more fun doing abstract things things because I can push the boundaries and I can get away with imperfections. 

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Shadowmist14 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really love the first one! Looks great!
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MyHeadWonders Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thanks friend!
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LilArtist23 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful work! I like the message in this. Colors r wonderful as well.
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GoGo-Ghosty Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015  Student General Artist
Hello! I'm from :icongrowing-artists:~
It's been a while (sorry for only just now getting to this), but would you still like a critique on this work?
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:iconmyheadwonders:
MyHeadWonders Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Hobbyist Interface Designer
If you wish, i dont mind!
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D-Goldenheart Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a really nice piece!!! I don't know what to say about this! Great job mate!
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:iconmyheadwonders:
MyHeadWonders Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thanks, glad to enjot! 
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:icond-goldenheart:
D-Goldenheart Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem!!!
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:iconmyheadwonders:
MyHeadWonders Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015  Hobbyist Interface Designer
=D
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:iconirrationalrationale:
irrationalrationale Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015
Cool!
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:iconmyheadwonders:
MyHeadWonders Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thanks
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:iconstam4o:
stam4o Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Interesting perception...
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:iconmyheadwonders:
MyHeadWonders Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thanks 
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:iconladybite:
LadyBite Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool idea, I like it very much!
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:iconmyheadwonders:
MyHeadWonders Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thanks!
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:iconlonelynightrain:
lonelynightrain Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing work!
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:iconmyheadwonders:
MyHeadWonders Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thanks friend!
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:iconlonelynightrain:
lonelynightrain Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome. :)
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:iconeiffa2222:
eiffa2222 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
like underworld and upperworld differ ^^
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:iconmyheadwonders:
MyHeadWonders Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
THANKS =D
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:iconeiffa2222:
eiffa2222 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome ^^
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:iconleahlovesnature:
LeahLovesNature Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014
I love a good watercolor.
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:iconmyheadwonders:
MyHeadWonders Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thanks love!
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:iconnakedcrayon23:
nakedcrayon23 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you got your statement crossed another level.man,you are awesome:clap:
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:iconmyheadwonders:
MyHeadWonders Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thanks, i tried 
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kmull10222 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
heyy
did you do this love it
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:iconmyheadwonders:
MyHeadWonders Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Yea of course I did it. thanks for the love!
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:iconkmull10222:
kmull10222 Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
love is my thing
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:iconmyheadwonders:
MyHeadWonders Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
=D
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sleepbabie Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student General Artist
God and his grand creation of Adam with the final act of Eve, and her poisonous ways.  This is what it reminds me of our fall from grace.  Wonderfully done.  
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MyHeadWonders Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Well glad you enjoy it and it creates thoughts
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sleepbabie Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Student General Artist
:D (Big Grin) 
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MyHeadWonders Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
 Wink/Razz =P (Razz) Hug Breadfish Kao Emoji-38 (What in the world?) [V2] Neko Emoji-11 (I luv apples) [V1] Bear Emoji-09 (Nom nom) [V1] 
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014
Great job :3
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:iconmyheadwonders:
MyHeadWonders Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thanks
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
Welcome:3
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hikingboots Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014
Awesome work!:heart:
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kryslalee Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I am not big on doing a critique, but I will tell you I really enjoy this piece.  The power of two, coming together, is immeasurable; and you have captured that.  Great work!
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:iconmyheadwonders:
MyHeadWonders Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thank you kindly!
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TiaraShin Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Love the colours and effects, good job on the hands too.:D
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:iconmyheadwonders:
MyHeadWonders Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thanks love
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:iconblanket86:
blanket86 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Beautiful and very interesting work! Great style. I like this composition!
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MIDangerfield Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013
Nice one :-)
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:iconmyheadwonders:
MyHeadWonders Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thanks, I appreciate the support!
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:iconmidangerfield:
MIDangerfield Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
No worries :-)
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:iconmyheadwonders:
MyHeadWonders Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Well don't be a stranger and feel free to talk to me anytime!!Hanging Out 3D noes medium Sneasel-Point's Icon Iphone maniac emoticon
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:iconmidangerfield:
MIDangerfield Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
Sure thing man :-)
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:iconmyheadwonders:
MyHeadWonders Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Alright sounds good
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